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I think I’m turning Japanese!'s avatar

Nice chapter. Gradually moving things forward. The leather pack has so much potential for future story development. The unique words written in the points list were intriguing. I figured xeno was referring to alien world things, so alien plants and relics. The other term I had to google though. I’ll be interested to see how you incorporate them in later chapters.

Owen T Badenoch's avatar

I’m finally catching up! And I like this installment. I agree with Roman. It moves things fires while establishing some more structure and leaving enough intrigue to make me eager for the next installment. Looking forward to it!

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